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Development communication for diffusion of innovation: a case study of Ramgaad mini-hydro project in India

• Published: 23 July 2022
• Volume 25 , pages 11699–11722, ( 2023 )

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• Prasoon Dwivedi 1 ,
• Alka Dwivedi 1 ,
• Rupesh Kumar   ORCID: orcid.org/0000-0002-6590-4313 1 &
• Aditi Khanduri 1  

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The development projects in India are facing the problem of diffusion of innovation and sustainability of developmental projects. The information disseminated in such projects tends to play an important role to motivate the receivers for social change. In the literature, the ineffectiveness of the sender–message–channel–receiver model has been criticized because it does not address the need for two-way communication for the sustainability of the project. This study aims to propose a development communication model for people's participation in sustainability projects. It discusses the case of the Ramgaad mini-hydro project (MHP), one of the most sustainable and successful MHP in Uttarakhand, India, in light of its efficient development communication strategy. The project sites and the beneficiary villages were visited for the study. The project sites and villages were narrowed down with the help of the state energy development agency, Uttarakhand Renewable Energy Development Agency (UREDA). FGDs and semi-structured interviews were conducted to understand the communication process and strategies and their role in sustainability and the success of the project. A three-stage conceptual model of development communication for energy development projects is an outcome of the study. This proposed model comprises three stages such as dissemination, acknowledgment, connection, and introduction of feedback by the receiver to the sender. The study recommends an innovative development communication model for diffusion of innovation and implementation of development projects. This model can help to enhance the sustainability of other development projects all around the world.

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This study has been funded by Indian Council of Social Science Research (ICSSR) for the project on “Design Principles of Mini and Micro Hydro Projects for implementing agencies in Uttarakhand”. We are thankful to ICSSR for the support provided. Sincere thanks to Mr A.K. Tyagi and his team from Uttarakhand Renewable Energy Development Agency (UREDA), the State Nodal Agency of Ministry of New and Renewable Energy (MNRE), New Delhi, India, for their providing necessary information and access to the project in remote areas. We would also like to extend our earnest thanks to VEC and the locals of Ramgaad for their invaluable support.

The article was funded by Indian Council of Social Science Research,(Grant No.G-32/2017-18/ICSSR/RP).

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Present your findings in a brief, informal presentation to the class.

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The Superconducting Supercollider (SSC) would have been the preeminent instrument on the planet for probing the fine structure of matter and the nature of the early Universe. Its price tag was $10 to $15 billion. It was cancelled by Congress in 1993 after about $2 billion had been spent — a worst of both worlds outcome. But this debate was not, I think, mainly about declining interest in the support of science. Few in Congress understood what modern high-energy accelerators are for. They are not for weapons. They have no practical applications. They are for something that is, worrisomely from the point of view of many, called “the theory of everything.” Explanations that involve entities called quarks, charm, flavor, color, etc., sound as if physicists are being cute. The whole thing has an aura, in the view of at least some Congresspeople I’ve talked to, of “nerds gone wild” — which I suppose is an uncharitable way of describing curiosity-based science. No one asked to pay for this had the foggiest idea of what a Higgs boson is. I’ve read some of the material intended to justify the SSC. At the very end, some of it wasn’t too bad, but there was nothing that really addressed what the project was about on a level accessible to bright but skeptical non-physicists. If physicists are asking for 10 or 15 billion dollars to build a machine that has no practical value, at the very least they should make an extremely serious effort, with dazzling graphics, metaphors, and capable use of the English language, to justify their proposal. More than financial mismanagement, budgetary constraints, and political incompetence, I think this is the key to the failure of the SSC.

CASE 6: The co-op student who mixed up genres

Chris was simultaneously enrolled in a university writing course and working as a co-op student at the Widget Manufacturing plant. As part of his co-op work experience, Chris shadowed his supervisor/mentor on a safety inspection of the plant, and was asked to write up the results of the inspection in a compliance memo . In the same week, Chris’s writing instructor assigned the class to write a narrative essay based on some personal experience. Chris, trying to be efficient, thought that the plant visit experience could provide the basis for his essay assignment as well.

He wrote the essay first, because he was used to writing essays and was pretty good at it. He had never even seen a compliance memo, much less written one, so was not as confident about that task. He began the essay like this:

On June 1, 2018, I conducted a safety audit of the Widget Manufacturing plant in New City. The purpose of the audit was to ensure that all processes and activities in the plant adhere to safety and handling rules and policies outlined in the Workplace Safety Handbook and relevant government regulations. I was escorted on a 3-hour tour of the facility by…

Chris finished the essay and submitted it to his writing instructor. He then revised the essay slightly, keeping the introduction the same, and submitted it to his co-op supervisor. He “aced” the essay, getting an A grade, but his supervisor told him that the report was unacceptable and would have to be rewritten – especially the beginning, which should have clearly indicated whether or not the plant was in compliance with safety regulations. Chris was aghast! He had never heard of putting the “conclusion” at the beginning . He missed the company softball game that Saturday so he could rewrite the report to the satisfaction of his supervisor.

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